November 6, 2015 (1)
Blog 1
P.E CLASS
On wednesday I went to school and it's was a good day until I went to P.E. class because when we start class the teacher send me to the office for no reason, I get really confused but I didn't say anything and I went. When I arrived to the office Ms. Mati and Ms. Twons called me to their office, I was so nervous, they told me to take a sit then Ms. Mati said to me that I'm in trouble because I haven't enter to P.E. class in a month, It's was true I haven't, but there was a reason. I have allergies and when October started I have a lot because of the sun and sand. So I went to the doctor and they gave me a justification saying "No P.E. class for a month", but the problem was that they noticed that I have been going after school to soccer but I didn't ran sometimes I can't stay all my life in my house.
They start telling that I was a liar but I wasn't my justification was VERY TRUE and I got really mad because it was my problem if a want to go to soccer and they can't do me anything because it was AFTER school, if I got recover before the month good for me! But it's still says ONE month and it's wasn't over. Mr. Luis noticed since a lot of time that I was going to soccer but he wait until the month was over so my justification expired to call the office. I think he could told me since a long time ago or ask me why I'm going to soccer? but for me is was unfair to punish me for something that the school said of justifications, and it's more unfair that he plan on calling the office when the month was over only so I can FAIL the class. I don't want to critized him and I don't hate him because I'm always happy and I love people but he is a very difficult person and he's always mad with life.
They start telling that I was a liar but I wasn't my justification was VERY TRUE and I got really mad because it was my problem if a want to go to soccer and they can't do me anything because it was AFTER school, if I got recover before the month good for me! But it's still says ONE month and it's wasn't over. Mr. Luis noticed since a lot of time that I was going to soccer but he wait until the month was over so my justification expired to call the office. I think he could told me since a long time ago or ask me why I'm going to soccer? but for me is was unfair to punish me for something that the school said of justifications, and it's more unfair that he plan on calling the office when the month was over only so I can FAIL the class. I don't want to critized him and I don't hate him because I'm always happy and I love people but he is a very difficult person and he's always mad with life.
Diana- I think that this post has a lot of conflict, which is totally awesome and you attempt to reach a concluding message, but you could make it more clear. The organization of your post could use a little work. I think it would work to break it up into more sentences and separate the paragraphs and maybe if you do that your ideas will become more clear and then you can reach a final message. Perhaps your message could be something along the lines of you don't understand why people do the things that they do and why they can't just be happy all the time. I'm looking forward to seeing these changes. Thanks for changing! :)
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